Writing With Mirrors

Writing With Mirrors: Reference Page

Here’s a quick outline of the material in my video Writing With Mirrors, for handy reference.

Intro

These ideas based on discussion of mirrors in Plot, by Ansen Dibell.

Mirror: Two elements in the story, related by being either alike or opposite.

Axis: A specific point of comparison in which the two things are similar or different.

Base Intuition: Using a mirror strengthens and enriches both sides, and highlights the axis.

Standard Proviso: There are no rules to writing.

Mirroring For Characterization

Character by Counterpoint: Instead of a character expressing themselves in a vacuum, we meet them in relation to other characters

Examples:

  • Sherlock Holmes, compared to Watson

  • Steven Universe, compared to the Crystal Gems (strange; alien; magical)

  • Steven Universe, compared to his father (human, normal, relatable)

More techniques:

  • Mirroring by Time, a comparison between who the character used to be and where they are now

  • Mirroring by Projection, the character represented by something external (e.g. Encanto’s magical powers for each family member)

  • Mirror Duo, writing with a focus on two primary characters rather than just one; every action or behavior keeps their pinwheel spinning.

Mirrors Defining Conflict

Protagonist vs. An Opposite

  • Frodo vs. Sauron

  • Belle vs. Gaston

  • Professor X vs. Magneto

Protagonist vs. A Parallel

  • Frodo vs. Gollum

  • Adora vs. Catra

Protagonist allied with an Opposite

  • Crowley vs. Aziraphale: angel/demon, heaven/hell

  • Tense alliances, internal conflict:

    • Boromir coveting the ring

    • Raistlin embracing dark magic

    • Zootopia’s Judy and Nick

Commonality between allies

  • Crowley and Aziraphale: similar abilities, similar approach to the same problems; shared appreciation of the human world

Reflections Switching Sides

  • Cypher in The Matrix, along the axis of “accepting harsh truth” vs. “living a sweet lie”

  • Roy Kent and Ted Lasso, along the axis of “caring about winning games” vs. “caring about the team’s well-being”

  • Batman vs. Superman, poor attempt at mirroring “has a mom named Martha,” without a well-established axis

Mirroring for Expectations and Narrative Logic

Establish expectations, for plausible consequences and “how things in this story work,” by letting us see things happen to other people first.

Mirroring a character against somebody with their anticipated future:

  • Frodo vs. Gollum

  • Katniss vs. Haymitch

  • Elizabeth Bennet vs. poor matches in Pride and Prejudice

Small Story/Big Story: let the protagonist go through a “small,” limited version of the same story patterns and logic that we’ll see later, larger, and more significant.

e.g.: The opening sequence to Indiana Jones and the Raiders of the Lost Ark.

Mirroring for Depth and Theme

Multiple mirroring gives our story a proliferation of consquences, echoes, and different angles and facets of a common central theme.

Example: The Good Place.

Summary

Using mirrors adds depth and richness to your stories

  • Immediate, effective characterization

  • Gives you a wider palette to draw from

  • Examine the world and characters from a variety of angles

  • All elements feel interconnected

Using mirrors focuses your story on what’s most important

  • Mirrors emphasize your axis

    • The sides are meaningful

    • And so the conflict is meaningful

  • The story becomes about similarities and differences, in the specific areas that matter most to you

Making up mirrors is easy

Guiding Questions:

  • What’s the opposite of this?

  • What do these have in common?

  • What’s a different approach to the same thing?

  • What new event will echo my existing events?

  • What is important in this story?

Full video: Writing With Mirrors.